waking up on Saturday mourning
the loss of Friday night
you know its not over
don't give up on the fight
why do you run for cover
there wont be any other
why do you give up loving
trying to feel nothing
why cant you open your heart
and let it sing
just be cool be yourself
just let it get interesting
and when the time is right
walk up and say whats right
don't shy away from it
its far to late to quit
why do you run for cover
there wont be any other
why do you give up loving
trying to feel nothing
why do you run for cover
there wont be any other
why do you give up loving
trying to feel nothing
please don't stay this way
please don't stay this way
don't let you love get away
don't let it get away
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this is an acoustic song i\'m working on...
the chords are D/ D something i made up / G / E minor / A minor / A the repeat...but its played wierd, you have to here it... and d something i made up is like this... x x 2 0 3 2 its sounds good...but i dont know if thats even a legit chord...lol... k... plz critique it... thanks... Comments
 It's going great!
 -- "Global warming is going to happen in 2 days before the day after tomorrow... oh my God, THAT'S TODAY!!!  "-South Park  sounds good so far!
thanks...
-- I'm pete...i appear in ~acerotiburon's comics from time to time... I'm the Rad-est dude on the internet...And the Coolest guy you might ever meet in person... my business is kickin' ass...and business is boomin'... your welcome.
 I think these are pretty good lyrics, but of course I have to hear the tune to fully enjoy them. But yeah, I think it would be cool to listen to.
-- Take Me As I Am  i just played the "chord" (still learning to play) so I think it sounds pretty cool LOL
-- Yeah, crazy fast imagination. Its like a super power!  sounds awesome
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--  This is a world of dreams and reverieWhere I felt the stars explode around me. A grass blade flashed with a gleam as it slashed open a moon beam - strawberry Avalanche, Owl City  *Doesn't have a Sub* Poor Man's Critique:
You need to proofread, and work on the lyrics a bit. I like the idea of the song, great, but it seriously needs work. Also its a bit of a false advertising situation. In my personal opinion, it would sound like something Karen O would sing. Failure. In the eyes of a pro: Maybe rewriting the whole thing would be better. It's great that your taking your interest in music, and putting it out here like this. ^_^ -- OSHI [link] Icon by me, totally. Possibility: If Mello committed suicide when young, and Matt was hallucinating about having Mello by his side the whole time til he died... Then my existence would have meaning. |
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You might have to make the song go from one tone to another to get some of the points in the song across.
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